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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents
average
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carbon
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 dioxide emission in metric tonnes between the
year
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years
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 1967 to 2007 in
the
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European countries like
United
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the United
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Kingdom
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,
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal. United
Kingdom
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 and
Sweden
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,
were greatly affect
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 by CO2 in 1967 compared to Italy and Portugal. Their
carbon
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 footprints per person were higher than the remaining two countries.
Sweden
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's CO2 increased sharply by 1977 which swiftly declined until 1987.
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, both the countries were able to gradually reduce
carbon
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emission
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emissions
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 after 1977 and kept decreasing until 2007.
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 to
United
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the United
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kingdom
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 and
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal were lower in
carbon
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emission
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emissions
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 in 1967 but it
consequently
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 seems to increase over the years affecting the environment until the year 2007. In conclusion, we can summarize the United
Kingdom
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 and
Sweden
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 have been able to reduce per capita
carbon
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 emissions than Italy and Portugal from
the
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1967 to 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, kingdom, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • CO2 emissions
  • per capita
  • decline
  • increase
  • trend
  • comparison
  • industrial growth
  • economic development
  • green energy
  • environmental policy
  • Kyoto Protocol
  • EU regulations
  • technological advancement
  • population growth
  • international agreements
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