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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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The table illustrates the
distinction
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distinct
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 species of birds seen in Woodchuck Country at different
season
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seasons
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of the year.
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that some species
are observe
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are observed
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 in both seasons
while
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,
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apply
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 some of them are seen in only
summer
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 and one of them is
winter
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in winter
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. In terms of bluebirds are
summer
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 birds because people see
it
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them
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 only
this
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 season.
However
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 , cardinals , crows and woodpeckers are not affected by the season. We can see it
in
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on
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suny
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sunny
days
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 and rainy
days
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 in the year.
Furthermore
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, mockingbirds , orioles and vireos are
summer
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 birds
againly
Correct your spelling
again
. We can
seen
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see
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 it only
this
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 period . What is more , juncos observe it only winter time. It is different for
the
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apply
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these
chart
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charts
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 because others are seen
it
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in
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summer
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in summer
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 but juncos do not prefer to
flying
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fly
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 it sunny
days
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. They like to fly
in
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on
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 rainy and cold
days
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words summer, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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