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The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates how many tourists visited a Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017. Units are measured in millions.
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, it can be seen that the number of people visiting a Caribbean
island
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 increased significantly over the given period. Notably, the figure which shows how many
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships lagged behind in 2010 but
then
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 it rose steadily and overtook the rate that illustrates the number of
visitors
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 staying on an
island
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 between 2015 and 2016.
According to
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 the graph, at the start approximately a
million
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 tourists stayed on a particular Caribbean
island
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 in 2010,
then
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this
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 figure climbed steadily and reached a peak of 3.5
million
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visitors
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 in the final years. Looking closely, it can be observed that just above 250 thousand people stayed on cruise ships in 2010, after that the rate fluctuated slightly before rising significantly to 2
million
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 in 2017. With regard to tourists who preferred staying on the
island
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, merely 750 thousand were in the first year,
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 the figure increased to 1.5
million
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 and remained unchanged from 2013 to 2015. After that, the number of
visitors
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 decreased to around 1.25
million
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 before increasing to 1,5
million
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 in the
last
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 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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