The line graph compares the
Japan
citizens of three age groups: Adolescent,mature and senior from 1960 with predicted figures for 2040.Replace the word
Japanese
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the 65+
group
and with Use synonyms
projection
of two other groups are expected to fall.
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the 0
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go
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remained
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the period
1970
and 2000,The adolescent Change preposition
between 1970
group
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arruptly
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abruptly
fall
by 15% compared to the senior Wrong verb form
fell
group
jumps Use synonyms
morderatedly
from 5% to 15% .In forty years of the next era, it is Correct your spelling
moderately
moderated
significantly
that the 65+ Change the word
significant
group
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inceases
immensely strongly Correct your spelling
decreases
about
25% ;Change preposition
by about
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the 0
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, it drops constantly by 10%.Use synonyms
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steady
fall
by 5%
In 2040, it is forecasted that there will be more seniors than adolescents, when the former will take up 35 Wrong verb form
falling
percent
of the population, compared to the latter’s 10 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
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per cent
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