The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AT LEAST 150 WORDS - 190 WORDS.

The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AT LEAST 150 WORDS - 190 WORDS.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AT LEAST 150 WORDS - 190 WORDS.
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The line graph compares the
Japan
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Japanese
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citizens of three age groups: Adolescent,mature and senior from 1960 with predicted figures for 2040.
Overall
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,it is
clearly
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clear
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that there is only an upward trend in
65+
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the 65+
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group
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and with
projection
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a projection
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of two other groups are expected to fall. Beginning from 1960 to 1970,The 25-64
group
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growth
reaches
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reached
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peak
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a peak
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point at 70%,followed by
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-14
group
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go
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up from 30% to 35% and the 65+
group
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remains
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remained
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unchanged
with
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at
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5%.
However
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,
at
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in
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period
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the period
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1970
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between 1970
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and 2000,The adolescent
group
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arruptly
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abruptly
fall
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fell
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by 15% compared to the senior
group
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jumps
morderatedly
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moderately
moderated
from 5% to 15% .In forty years of the next era, it is
significantly
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that the 65+
group
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inceases
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decreases
immensely strongly
about
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by about
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25% ;
in contrast
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to
0
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the 0
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-14
group
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, it drops constantly by 10%.
Beside
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,the mature
group
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remains
steadily
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, just
fall
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falling
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by 5% In 2040, it is forecasted that there will be more seniors than adolescents, when the former will take up 35
percent
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per cent
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of the population, compared to the latter’s 10
percent
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per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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