The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land become lesson productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land become lesson productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land become lesson productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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compares the main causes of
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degradation
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worldwide and how these reasons affected
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three big regions over the 1990s. 
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, the largest proportion of
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degradation
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in the world is caused by overgrazing, especially in Oceania.
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deforestation and over-cultivation are other significant causes of
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degradation
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,
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more than half
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of
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chart and
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most popular
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in Europe. 
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the first chart, the most
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reason
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of
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worldwide
land
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degradation
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problems are overgrazing, deforestation, and over-cultivation (almost a whole part of global causes). The
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among three is other problems, which is not good at all.  Another table shows that there is a significant difference between regions except big regions
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as Europe and North America, we can see a large group of islands
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located in
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Pacific called Oceania, which
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second place after Europe,
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total
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is quarter of
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degradation
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, degradation with synonyms.
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