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Some believe that what is learnt at school is not useful at life and the most important lessons are learnt out of school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people consider that
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school
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 does not teach children important lessons and valuable skills may be learnt in real
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 circumstances. I partly agree with
this
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 statement. On the one hand,
learning
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 process in
school
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 is fundamental for
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life
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 basic knowledge. Because,
main
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 things
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required in real
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 children can learn in
school
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program
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programs
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such
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 as writing, reading, communication,
exploring
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and exploring
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 through experiments.
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, if we
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take
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an average
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 scheduled
lesson
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, the main purpose of
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 is
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 children
real
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life
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 through subjects.
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, initial knowledge might be crucial to find out suitable
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 and to form youngsters’ character toward
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their
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 future
career
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.
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, theories which were given by teachers may not be exactly what
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school
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of school
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graduate
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. The reason is that
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 real
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faster
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 and many works
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 engineering, manufacturing or other social jobs require high demand in
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 field.
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, many jobs like engineering
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 deep-thinking,
problem-solving
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and problem-solving
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 skills when unexpected
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happened
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.
Specialist
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Specialists
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 in that field should be more accomplished in order to take quick action and
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 why it creates demand for practical experience.
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, gaining suitable knowledge could take many years of training.
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, despite education plays in shaping teenagers’ basic skills, the main valuable
experience
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experiences
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 are achieved through
practices
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practice
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 and attempts.

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task achievement
Expand your introduction to clearly state your position on the issue. Make it explicit whether you agree or disagree with the statement.
coherence and cohesion
Provide clearer topic sentences to guide the reader through your main points. Each paragraph should start with a statement that summarizes the main idea.
coherence and cohesion
Use more transition words to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs, which can aid in clarity and coherence of the argument.
task achievement
You have provided relevant examples to support your main points, which is a positive aspect of your essay.
task achievement
Your essay presents a balanced view by acknowledging both sides of the argument, demonstrating critical thinking.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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