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Writing Samples
Band 5

You use public transport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport authorities. In your letter include: Why public transport is important to you What problem you face Suggest what can be done to improve public transport

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about the problems which I am facing
while
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 using public transport. I am a student and I am studying
master
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master's
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 in science at Oxford University. My college is ten
kilometers
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kilometres
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far
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away
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 from my home and I always use public buses to
reach
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get
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 there.
Moreover
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,
yearly
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a yearly
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 student pass is provided by
college
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the college
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 and it is included in
tuition
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the tuition
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 fee.
Hence
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, public transport is
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a convient
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convient
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convenient
 way for me to travel. There are some
issue
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issues
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 which I have to face during my journey.
Firstly
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, there is very limited service to that route and existing buses
always
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are always
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 full
with
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of
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 passengers.
Therefore
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, I
always
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am always
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 late for study.
Furthermore
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, there is no
shalter
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shelter
 to wait for another bus.
people
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People
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 face lots of
problem
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problems
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 during bad weather like rain. In my
advise
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, you should build some stations for waiting and more numbers of buses should be run in
morning
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the morning
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 time when most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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individuals use transport for work and study. Your early action on
this
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 matter will be
appricated
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appreciated
. Best regards, Manoj Kumar

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task achievement
Consider providing more details about the specific issues you face, such as how they affect your daily life or academic performance.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to proofread for grammar and punctuation errors, as there are minor issues present.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph clearly focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
The letter has a clear purpose and effectively communicates the importance of public transport to you.
coherence and cohesion
You have used a polite tone appropriate for a formal letter.
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