You are planning a holiday abroad and will be visiting a town where an old friend lives. You haven't spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give a brief update of your life since last in touch •Explain why you will be travelling to his/her town • say what you plan to do when you visit their town

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Dear Rahul, I'm writing to let you know that next month I am

comining

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coming

combining

to spend some time in your city. As you know, I was doing

master's

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a master's

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hisrory

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history

when you went to

canada

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Canada

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for your higher study and you will

happy

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be happy

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to know that I finished my University in

first

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the first

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division. You will be surprised after meeting me as I have

gain

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gained

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ten

kilogrames

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kilogrammes

kilograms

weight. The reason why I have to make a plan to visit your city is my next project on old

western

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Western

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history which I have to submit to get

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apply

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admission for

resarch

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research

study. In your town London there is one famous

musuem

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museum

, having lots of ancient

time collection

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times collections

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. I believe

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can help me to understand my project. So, in my plan, I want to visit that place and want to

captured

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capture

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knowledge.

Moreover

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, we

did't

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didn't

get

chance

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a chance

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to meet

from

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for

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many years and

this

Linking Words

is the best moment to enjoy some quality time. Excited to see you soon Best Wishes,

Mnaoj

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Manoj

Kumar

manojkansal30Tue Apr 01 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your points more clearly into distinct paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve clarity.

task achievement

Correct the spelling mistakes (e.g., 'comining' should be 'coming,' 'hisrory' should be 'history,' 'gain' should be 'gained,' 'kilogrames' should be 'kilograms,' etc.). This will enhance the overall quality of your letter.

task achievement

Make sure to use the correct articles, prepositions, and plural forms for more grammatical accuracy.

task achievement

You provided a nice update about your academic success, which personalizes the letter well.

task achievement

The letter expresses genuine excitement about reconnecting with your friend, which adds warmth to the tone.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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