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You are planning a holiday abroad and will be visiting a town where an old friend lives. You haven't spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give a brief update of your life since last in touch •Explain why you will be travelling to his/her town • say what you plan to do when you visit their town

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Dear Rahul, I'm writing to let you know that next month I am
comining
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coming
combining
 to spend some time in your city. As you know, I was doing
master's
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a master's
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 in
hisrory
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history
 when you went to
canada
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Canada
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 for your higher study and you will
happy
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be happy
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 to know that I finished my University in
first
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the first
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 division. You will be surprised after meeting me as I have
gain
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gained
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 ten
kilogrames
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kilogrammes
kilograms
 weight. The reason why I have to make a plan to visit your city is my next project on old
western
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Western
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 history which I have to submit to get
my
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apply
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admission for
resarch
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research
 study. In your town London there is one famous
musuem
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museum
, having lots of ancient
time collection
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times collections
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. I believe
I
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it
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 can help me to understand my project. So, in my plan, I want to visit that place and want to
captured
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capture
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 knowledge.
Moreover
Linking Words
, we
did't
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didn't
 get
chance
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a chance
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 to meet
from
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for
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 many years and
this
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 is the best moment to enjoy some quality time. Excited to see you soon Best Wishes,
Mnaoj
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Manoj
 Kumar

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coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your points more clearly into distinct paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Correct the spelling mistakes (e.g., 'comining' should be 'coming,' 'hisrory' should be 'history,' 'gain' should be 'gained,' 'kilogrames' should be 'kilograms,' etc.). This will enhance the overall quality of your letter.
task achievement
Make sure to use the correct articles, prepositions, and plural forms for more grammatical accuracy.
task achievement
You provided a nice update about your academic success, which personalizes the letter well.
task achievement
The letter expresses genuine excitement about reconnecting with your friend, which adds warmth to the tone.
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