Write a letter to a friend about an item you borrowed last week, that accidentally got damaged. In your letter – Describe the item. – What was the damage? – What do you intend to do to rectify the problem?

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Dear Reena, Hope you are doing well . I am writing

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letter regarding a Necklace Set

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borrowed from you

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week for my cousin's wedding . Everyone at the party gave me compliments on the set as going very well with my outfit

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the diamonds in it

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an extra vibe. Unforuntentely,

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I was dancing dance at the party , the necklace

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one

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apply

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string broke automatically am not sure if it got snatched by mistake or if something else happened . The value of

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necklace is priceless as

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this is

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belonged

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to your mother.

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damage can be repaired by any jewellery easily ,

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will arrange that but

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believe it will take some more time to return. I hope you will understand my situation. thank you for believing in me and letting me borrow your stuff With warm regards,

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Grammar

Ensure all sentences are complete and check for grammatical errors, such as "Unforuntely" which should be "Unfortunately."

Coherence

Use paragraphs effectively by separating distinct ideas to enhance clarity. For example, consider starting a new paragraph when discussing the damage and your intentions for repair.

Task Achievement

Be more explicit about how long it may take to repair the necklace to give your friend a clearer idea of what to expect.

Tone

You maintained a warm and friendly tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for communication with a friend.

Detail

You included specific details about the necklace and the incident, which helps create a vivid picture for the reader.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

147 words

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Write a letter to a friend about an item you borrowed last week, that accidentally got damaged. In your letter – Describe the item. – What was the damage? – What do you intend to do to rectify the problem?

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