Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank them for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you.

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Dear Olivia, I hope you're doing splendidly! It's been a long time since we caught each other.

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we met one month ago

but

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it felt like

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met

few

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days ago. Whenever

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I saw our trip photos, I felt like down in the dumps because we

don't

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know when we

will

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meet each other again. I'm really thankful to you for organizing the holiday and

took

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a lots

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a lot

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of pictures for memories. As you know

that

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I am a lazy person and

due to

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hectic

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a hectic

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schedule, I've no time to write a letter but yesterday, I found

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time and I wrote a letter to

remember

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remind

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you

about

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our

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beautiful memories that we stored in your phones on our

last

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trip. I'm excited

that

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about

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when you will visit my hometown and stay with me

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We will definitely explore new adventures

places

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and places

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along with

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thrilling activities. I will invite you on my birthday and will organize

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party as well. I am eagerly waiting for you. Lots of love, Manjinder Kaur

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coherence and cohesion

Try to improve the logical flow of ideas, making sure each paragraph has a clear focus and relates to the main topic.

task achievement

Add more specific details about your hometown and possible activities to enhance the invitation.

task achievement

You conveyed warm feelings and gratitude clearly, creating an inviting and friendly tone.

coherence and cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter were effective and appropriate, enhancing the overall impression of your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank them for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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