You are planning a holiday abroad and will be visiting a town where an old friend lives. You haven't spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give a brief update of your life since last in touch •Explain why you will be travelling to his/her town • say what you plan to do when you visit their town

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Dear Tricia, Hope you are doing well! I am writing to inform you that I have plans to visit your city next month

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a week from 10th April to 17th April. These days I'm working as a finance analyst in multi

national

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company and they have one project in your town which my company wants me to handle. It really excites me to know that my project is in your town. It's been really a long time,

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almost

two years since we met

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our graduation ceremony. Life changed for all of us after graduation, everyone

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busy with their new jobs.

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, opportunities like

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should not be missed to catch up with friends like you.

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, I will be busy on weekdays

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office work

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the weekend

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weekend

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we can make a plan. If you want I will come to stay at your place and enjoy

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movies which remind me of our college days. We can

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plan for

weekend

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the weekend

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tour if you want. Please let me know your plan

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that particular weekend. Hope you will manage your schedule and love to see you soon. Warm Wishes Ashima Gulati

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Spelling and Grammar

Make sure to proofread your letter for minor spelling mistakes like 'foe' instead of 'for' and 'alomost' instead of 'almost.' Such errors can detract from the overall professionalism of your writing.

Content

Try to provide a bit more detail about your current job and experiences since graduation. This can enhance the personal touch of your letter.

Coherence

Consider using more transitional phrases to improve the flow between sentences and ideas, which will help in building coherence.

Greeting and Closing

You successfully included a greeting and a closing, which adds a friendly tone to the letter.

Task Achievement

Your intention to catch up and address your friendship demonstrates a good understanding of the purpose of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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