Nowadays, more and more
people
are concerned about the Use synonyms
time
spent on music. Use synonyms
However
, whether playing musical Linking Words
instruments
is a waste of Use synonyms
time
is a controversial issue. In my opinion, playing musical Use synonyms
instruments
like Use synonyms
piano
or violin Correct article usage
the piano
are
beneficial for Change the verb form
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people
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life
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Firstly
, it is obvious that playing Linking Words
instruments
is another tool to communicate in our modern life. Use synonyms
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is Linking Words
because
the rich and powerful Add the preposition
because of
people
in our society who can communicate without language Use synonyms
barrier
all over the world. Fix the agreement mistake
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For example
, Linking Words
people
should be encouraged not only to Use synonyms
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but Verb problem
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also
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to achieve
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reaching
to each other in general, which Replace the word
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give
them a worldwide friendly talking style and Correct subject-verb agreement
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make
them more united in different countries.
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Secondly
, persuading Linking Words
people
to play musical Use synonyms
instruments
would be a more effective strategy for improving sleep quality, especially for elder Use synonyms
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. Use synonyms
For instance
, what Linking Words
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people
need most is not only moneyUse synonyms
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also
leisure activities and Linking Words
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mood. The fact Correct article usage
a stable
people
attend a concert could relax their Use synonyms
body
and refresh their memory.
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This
is not to say that spending too much Linking Words
time
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on
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instruments
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is
peoples’
long-term development. Change noun form
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Likewise
, Linking Words
instead
of relaxing, Linking Words
people
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also
need to focus on their main job and take their responsibilities Linking Words
on
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in
that
societies to be stable and move forward. Correct word choice
so that
While
there are both benefits and drawbacks to both approaches, it is safe to say that the pros of playing musical Linking Words
instruments
outweigh the cons.
In conclusion, if Use synonyms
people
want to play musical Use synonyms
instruments
, they are welcome to do so which will make them feel full of happiness. Meanwhile, we Use synonyms
would
not ignore the fact that wasting too much Verb problem
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time
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of
playing Change preposition
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instruments
can have negative effects. By doing so, we can make sure that Use synonyms
people
who focus on playing musical Use synonyms
instruments
become more helpful and necessary than those who do not.Use synonyms