The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps can be used to observe the

transofration

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transformation

that Bunborough is

planned

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go through,

that

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which

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will be completed by the end of Autumn of 2024.

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, the whole city will be modernized, with the introduction of a railroad that will pass through the entire village, and,

consequently

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, a train station;

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, a new road is planned to be constructed. The fishing port will be replaced with a promenade, and, near it, one of the two hotels, which are planned to be constructed, will be built. Nowadays, Bunborough is a small village near

Maychester

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Manchester

and Lynwich, made of a few houses, some shops and a fishing port;

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, it is badly connected to other cities since there is only one main road. It is planned that the village will experience

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apply

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modernization, with the introduction of new infrastructures,

such

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as a new railroad and its central station, and a new street that will connect directly

the

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centre with Lynwich.

Consequently

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, it will be easier to visit the place,

therefore

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, hotels are

also

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planned to be built.

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, where now there is the fishing port there will be a promenade

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Anticipation
Significant
Conversion
Commercial activities
Expansion
Enhancing
Bypassing
Congestion
Connectivity
Recreational area
Demolition
Infrastructure
Preservation
Public transportation hub
Encourage

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