The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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By looking at two pictures from 1995 and now on, I can see a bit of differences between past and present, As I can see, there were some shops and a fish market on the opposite side of the road, there are restaurants and apartments now with sea views in the southwest.
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, There were ports before, now it's just completely the coast,as I can guess with the lovely beach. In the west and west-north, we can notice that people have built more houses and longer roads
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the past years. At the same time, where previously villages had farmland and forest
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park
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parks
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to the north-east and east, now it happened to be a golf field with a few tennis courts. But taking into account that they had cut down the forest
park
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, made me feel uncomfortable at the same time. In the south-east nothing much has changed except
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now we have there a car
park
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, but both the hotel and cafe have been left as it was in those old times. In my opinion, it does have quite nice changes at the present, but at the same time, not without sacrificing,
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, the forest
park
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • residential expansion
  • modernization effort
  • commercial
  • urban development
  • preserved
  • recreational areas
  • transportation infrastructure
  • eco-friendly
  • renovation
  • transformation
  • bike paths
  • car park
  • establishment
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