The bar chart below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over of three countries in 1980 and 2000 and prediction in 2030.

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bar chart compares the figures for the percentages of the elderly in three different countries, including Canada,

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, and the UK, in three different single years (1980, 2000 and 2030).

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, in 1980 and 2000, the proportion of people aged 65 and over in

Germany

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was the highest among these areas.

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, in 2030, the percentage of people aged 65 and over in

Germany

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will still be the largest.

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, all countries presented in

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graph experienced a dramatic increase in the population of the elderly from 1980 to 2000.

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, it is expected to continue by 2030. In 1980, the rates of people aged 65 and over in Canada,

Germany

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, and the UK stood at 10%, 15% and just below 15%, respectively. By 2000, the percentages of the elderly in these areas saw a growth, ranging from about 2% to 5%.

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the rate of the elderly living in the UK was higher than that in Canada, by around 4%, in 1980, they were equal in 2000, at 15%. In terms of prediction in 2030, the percentages of the elderly in all regions will soar, by close to 4% to nearly 7%. The expectation for 2030 shows the elderly will account for around 20% of their total population, with roughly 22% (Canadian), 25% (German) and just under 20% (British).

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

221 words

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The bar chart below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over of three countries in 1980 and 2000 and prediction in 2030.

Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there is more and more competition for getting into university. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

General task 1 Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.