The following table shows the number of factory wrokers for a given time period in Germany. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following table shows the number of factory wrokers for a given time period in Germany. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The following table shows the number of factory wrokers for a given time period in Germany. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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of factory employees in 4 different categories for a period once in a decade starting from 1851
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1901in Germany.
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, it can be clearly seen that the highest and lowest trend of workers both for
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with total number 477.100 and 61.000 are in 1851 and 1901,
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, the situation in factories differs from the others, specifically, the peak figure was 721 in 1881,
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the lowest was 225 in the first year. It is clearly observed that the ratio of male and female staff peaked in the initial year, with men comprising the majority. In the following decade, yet , the statistics with a significant fall with women forming the larger portion - 160,000. From 1872 to 1901, the declines
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gradually every ten-year span, and eventually, the count of workers of both genders dropped to around 31,000 and 30,000 correspondingly. As for the count of team members, a continuous decrease was observed from the beginning to the end. Turning to the factories category, the highest point was reached in 1881, succeeded by a minor drop, with nearly identical numbers of 625 and 622 in 1891 and 1871, in that sequence.

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