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The graphs below show the size of the ozone hole over Antarctica and the production of three ozone-damaging gases from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the size of the ozone hole over Antarctica and the production of three ozone-damaging gases from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the extent of the ozone
hole
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 over Antarctica and the construction of
CFC-
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11,
CFC-
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12 and nitrous oxide gases from 1980 to 2000. The data is measured in
square
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km
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 and million
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that the size of the
hole
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 over Antarctica increased over time,
whereas
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 the production of
CFC-
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11 decreased, and
CFC-
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12 remained constant throughout the time. By observing the chart, it can be seen that in 1980, the
hole
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 was 500
square
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km
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 (in thousands), which inclined to 2000
square
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km
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 in 1990 and began to decline for the next three years. By the end of 2000, the size of the
hole
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 recorded near 4000
square
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km
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.
Furthermore
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, the production of
CFC-
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11 was 70
tonnes
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 in the initial year, which gradually dropped to around 5 million
tonnes
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 in 2000. Whilst around 25
tonnes
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 of
CFC-
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12 was produced in 1980, started to slightly increase and reached over 40
tonnes
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 in 2000.
However
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, the production of nitrous gas started in 1990 and after a decade it reached 30 million
tonnes
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hole, cfc-, square, km, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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