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The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

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The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
The given bar chart illustrates the percentages of
children
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, men and women who consumed five portions of fresh fruits and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008 in the United Kingdom
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, there was a clear difference among the three groups. Specifically, women consistently had the highest position over the years, followed by men
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children
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 had the lowest figures. In terms of women,
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 for the largest position during the period. At
beginning
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, the figure increased from approximately 22
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percent
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per cent
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 in 2001 to 34
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percent
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per cent
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 in 2006, before falling to 29
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percent
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per cent
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 in 2008. Meanwhile, there was a
steadily rose
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 in men from around 16
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percent
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per cent
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 to 28
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percent
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per cent
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 between 2001 and 2006 , before declining to 26
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percent
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per cent
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 in the final year.
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,
children
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 accounted
the
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for the
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 smallest share
in
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apply
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every year. Their figure remained unchanged at around 13
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percent
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per cent
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 between 2001 and 2003 . After
that
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 there was a substantial growth in the number of
children
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ate
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who ate
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 five portions of fruits and vegetables from 17
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percent
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per cent
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 in 2004 to approximately 27
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percent
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per cent
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 in 2007 before dropping slowly to 24
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percent
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per cent
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 by the end of the period

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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • portion
  • consumption
  • trend
  • significant increase/decrease
  • stability
  • public health campaign
  • awareness
  • socio-economic factors
  • health implications
  • daily intake
  • nutritional habits
  • dietary guidelines
  • public policy
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