A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. HelShe has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Hey Harjit, How's it going?I hope you're doing well.It's been a
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since we had a chat-I honestly can't even remember.I was really excited for you when I heard about your camping trip with your family. Since I have
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camping several times I think you will absolutely enjoy it.
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summer , I visited
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Banf Campgrounds and it was
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wonderfull
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wonderful

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experience for me as I got
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chance to do adventurous activities
such
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as trekking, hiking and birdwatching-coming out of
comfortable
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my comfort

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zone it was
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apply

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quite
fascinating
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a fascinating

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experience .Being
ecophile
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an ecophile

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,I think you would enjoy interesting tasks
such
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as sleeping out in the tents, outdoor cooking and walking through bamboo trees - would be
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quiet

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and peaceful for you. Despite all these fun
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acts,

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there are a few things to keep in mind before planning a camping trip.
Firstly
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, make sure you have
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apply

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enough food supplies and especially, carry some extra water- running out of water in the middle of nowhere isn't fun.
Additionaly
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Additionally

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,
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time I forgot to check the prediction of
weather
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the weather

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and
it
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I

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ended up with, me
in
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on

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the muddy trails so don't forget to check
weather
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the weather

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forecast. By the way, me and my family are
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planning for outing
this
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summer. We would love to hang out with you guys.Let me know if
this
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sound
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sounds

The plural verb sound does not appear to agree with the singular subject this. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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good
for
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to

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you. Waiting for your response. With love, Amar.

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coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure that there's a clearer separation between ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single theme or point.
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task achievement
The letter has a friendly tone, making it approachable and warm, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
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You provided personal experiences and specific recommendations, which adds value to your friend's inquiry about camping.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Budget-friendly
  • Unplugged retreat
  • Campsite
  • Tent pitching
  • Outdoor cooking
  • De-stress
  • Itinerary
  • Back-to-nature
  • Bonding experience
  • Hiking trails
  • Weather forecast
  • Amenities
  • Wildlife safety
  • Essential gear
  • Adventure
  • Disconnect
  • Tranquility
  • Navigational skills
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