The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the percentage of Canadian people who donated
money
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to charity by different
age
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groups in 2000 and 2015.
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, what stands out in the graph is that the proportion of Canadian donors increased in 2015; the
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of
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50 to 64 years old donated more
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than the
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of
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18 to 24, which donated less
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. In 2000, people aged 35 to 49 donated more
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, and the 18-to-24
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range donated less. In 2000, the
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of 18 to 24 donated just 20%; the 35-to-49
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group
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gave just below 40% to charity, double the first
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. The groups of 25 to 34, 50 to 64 and 65 and over during 2000 had percentages fluctuating just below 35
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. Turning to 2015, the
group
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of 50 to 64 donated almost 40%, triple the
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of 18 to 24, with only 10%. The 25-to-34
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range doubled the
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of 18 to 24, with 25%. The other groups hovered near 35%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, age, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • age range
  • charitable organisations
  • fluctuates
  • notable changes
  • participation
  • considerable decrease
  • contrast
  • consistent increase
  • middle age groups
  • peak
  • notable drop
  • shift
  • financial priorities
  • economic circumstances
  • demographic
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