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the table below shows daily il production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004

the table below shows daily il production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004
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The tabular chart illustrates the
oil
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 produced by four different nations on a daily basis over the period of 5 years.
Overall
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, it was observed that production of
oil
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 was inclined in every country over half
decade
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a decade
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 except Congo which showed a decline of 72,000
barrels
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 per day.
In addition
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, Nigeria and Congo were more productive regions as compared to
Samolia
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Somalia
 and Chad. In 2000, Congo was the highest
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oil producing
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oil-producing
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 country
of
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 275,000
barrels
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 of fuel
everyday
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every day
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 which gradually kept decreasing for the next four years and dropped to 203,000.
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, Samalia extracted 5,000
barrels
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 each day and rose to 17,000 in
next
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the next
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 two years. After that, slightly increased in the following 12 months before it dramatically surged to 50,000 in 2004.
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, Chad commenced fuel extraction in 2003 with 8,000
barrels
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 daily and
then
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 jumped to 50,000 by 2004.
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, Nigeria was the only nation in which the manufacturing of
oil
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 steadily dropped from 205,000 (in 2000) to 190,000 (in 2002). In the next 24 months, extraction significantly sored to 210,000 and 213,000 in 2003 and 2004 respectively.

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