The bar chart shows teh hoghest qualification attained by sex fro the working age population in wales in 2001/2002. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart shows teh hoghest qualification attained by sex fro the working age population in wales in 2001/2002. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The
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bar graph displays the top qualification gained by gender for the working
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people in a specific province in 2001/2002.
Overall
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, it
noticeable
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that there
were
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a fluctuation in
men
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and women's attained qualified over the period,
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, the top
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degree got by males was GCE A level or equivalent, and by women was GCSE grade A+ or equivalent,
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the lowest certification in both genders was the higher education qualification.
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with, nearly 30%
male
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and female students gained GCE A level certified education, and GCSC grade A+ or equivalent grade respectively, which is the top percentage of total qualifications.
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, less than 10%
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genders had higher education
qualification
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qualifications
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which is the lowest professional degree among
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the six
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mentioned
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categories
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, both men and women had nearly
same
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the same
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qualifications in degree and other certifications with just above 10% over the period. Another interesting part was around 25% and 20% of females and males did not have any qualifications respectively at all in the mentioned years.

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