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The chart illustrates the amount of pollution in two categories of sulphur dioxide and smoke in London between 1600 and 2000, in micrograms per cubic metre unit.

Firstly

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, it is

obviuos

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obvious

that both categories started their journey from zero,

then

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touched a peak, and after that returned to zero again.

Additionaly

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Additionally

, their trends in different periods, are

some how

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somehow

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similar to each other, but the

difference

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differences

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between them

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are

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various.

Accordingly

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, sulphur dioxide reaches its maximum value between 1800 and 1850 which is almost

near

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apply

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900 micrograms per cubic metre unit,

While

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smoke reaches

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its

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peak 50 years after that.

Additionally

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, both categories start a downward trend

untill

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until

they

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are

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zero in 2000. Alternatively, the difference between

two

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the two

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groups increases between 1600 and 1700, after a short decrease, it is again increasing after 1800 until 1850.

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

136 words

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