The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure displays the rate of expenditure of families' weekly income in a country between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, some categories of
spendings
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spending
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experienced drastic declines since 1968, where families spent less on food, fuel and power, fashion and personal goods and spent more on housing, transport and leisure. Since 1968, Food
expenses
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have decreased significantly by around 18% of weekly income, which recorded
the
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apply
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significant changes compared to other spending.
Expenses
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such
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as fuel, wearable items and personal goods decreased modestly by around 3%, 5% and 4%
subsequently
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. Leisure
expenses
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is
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are
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one of the highest
expenses
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that families are willing to spend in 2018, where the figure increased significantly by around 10% compared to 1968.
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This
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These
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increments
also
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showed in other categories,
such
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as housing
that
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which
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increased by 10% and transport by 5%. The remaining
expenses
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, household goods, are still on par since 1968 at 8%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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