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The charts below show the figure for work hours per week in the industrial sector in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main characteristics, and compare with the corresponding ones. The charts below show the figure for work hours per week in the industrial sector in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main characteristics, and compare with the corresponding ones.

The charts below show the figure for work hours per week in the industrial sector in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main characteristics, and compare with the corresponding ones. The charts below show the figure for work hours per week in the industrial sector in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main characteristics, and compare with the corresponding ones.
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The four bar graphs above illustrate the statistics about working time in the industrial department during 2002 in France, Denmark, Sweden and the UK.
Overall
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, the 36-37
hours
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 account for the biggest share except France.
By contrast
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, the number of workers for 31-35 is the largest . In terms of France, the proportion of 31-35
hours
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 weekly ranked first(50%), which is followed by the figure for 36-40
hours
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 per week, with almost 35%. The quantities of stuff for both 1-14 and 50+
is
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are
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 smaller
40
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by 40
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% than 31-35. As for
other
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the other
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 three nations, the 36-40
hours
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 ranked
first,
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70%, 80% and 50%,
repectively
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respectively
.
Moreover
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, the 31-35
hours
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 in Denmark and Sweden ranked second (about 22% and 35%).
However
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, 50+
hours
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 in the UK ranked second.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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