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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans compare the current site of an
airport
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 and the future site after its redevelopment next year.
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, the site of
an
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airport
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 will be expanded, increasing the number of
gates
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.
Walkway
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The walkway
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 will disappear and be replaced with a sky train,
while
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 other services will remain. Additional facilities will be added as well. At
this
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 moment, the
airport
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 has only 8
gates
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 and they are connected by a walkway. 10 more
gates
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 will be developed, making the
airport
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 have 18
gates
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 in the future.
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 an increase in the number of
gates
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, the walkway will be replaced with a sky train.
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, shops will be available after the security and passport control zone of the departures. Apart from the services mentioned above, the check-in area and cafe in the departures will be moved to other places
nearby
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near
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 the current ones.
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, a bag drop zone will replace the check-in area in the departures. In terms of the arrivals, a cafe, an ATM, and a car hiring service will be available after the
redevleopment
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redevelopment
development
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Consider providing a clearer overview in the introduction by summarizing the key changes in a more detailed manner.
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Ensure your paragraphs flow smoothly into one another by using more linking phrases or transitions.
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Try to provide more contrasting features between the current and future plans to enrich your comparisons.
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The essay clearly identifies the main features of the airport's redevelopment, which demonstrates a solid understanding of the task.
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The inclusion of specific details, such as the number of gates and the introduction of amenities, strengthens your response.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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