With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer dome possible solutions to it.

In recent years the rate of family breakdown and

seperation

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separation

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as

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a result of

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of closeness and distance between family members. In

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intened

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to explore the root of

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issue

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posible

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possible

solution

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. Two main principal reasons

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are as follows. First of all, In these days both parents work

outdors

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outdoors

with a huge amount of

time

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.

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, in earlier

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one parent

work

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outdor

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outdoors

of

house

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the house

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and assumed the role of breadwinner and the

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other-typically

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mother- acted as the homemaker.

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, in these modern

lifestyle

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double income

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families have become

norm

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.

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,

ther

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there

are a lot of

childern

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children

who grow up in parentless

environment

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and solitary activities have become much more popular in society.

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and even more importantly, though, it is a significant fact that both men and women work to support their families with financial problems. In modern

countries

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there will be

a subsidies

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by

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,

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if you have an infant.

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incentive

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would probably not fully support families, but it would

be help

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in

favore

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favour

of parents to remain at home and spend

time

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with their family members. It should be considered by all of the

government

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governments

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around the world that offer financial

incentive

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to those parents.

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,

community

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the community

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should encourage more interactive leisure activities through public education campaigns. For sure, it would

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a lot more

communation

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communication

and closeness between your loved ones. By way of conclusion, once again I reaffirm my position that

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complexity will not likely resolve in the short

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,

government

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should consider the abovementioned items to cope with

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issue as the first step.