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The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Australia between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Australia between 1995 and 2005.
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The line graph given illustrates the comparison of the expenditure on
books
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 in separate countries from 1995 to 2005. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is evident that the amount of money spent on
books
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 in all nations showed an upward trend.
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, the figure for Germany was generally higher than those of the other categories over the years shown. In 1995, the budget for
books
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 in Germany was
largest
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the largest
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, at $80
million
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. The data on France and Italy were lower, at approximately $55
million
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 and $50
million
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, respectively. Austria,
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, accounted for the lowest value , at $30
million
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. In the following years, there was a fluctuating increase in the amount of money expended on
books
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 in Germany to roughly $95
million
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,
whereas
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 that of France continuously grew to somewhere in the vicinity of about $75
million
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 in 2005. Meanwhile, after reaching a high of around $55
million
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 in 1997, the spending on
books
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 in Italy marginally declined to $50
million
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 in 1999 before climbing to about $60
million
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 in the
last
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 year. The data on Austria witnessed a slight growth to $40
million
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 and remained stable for the next two years, after which it surged to approximately $70
million
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at the end
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 of the period supplied.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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