The line graph displays the percentage of residents
who
aged above 65 in Canada,Germany and
the UK from 1980 to 2000 and a forecast for 2030.
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significant differences,the figures for retired individuals witnessed a
growth in all countries over the timeframe.It is readily apparent thatCorrect the article-noun agreement
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,
elderly people constitute the
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highest
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while
the opposite was true for Canada.
On the one hand,the rate in Canada began as the lowest observation,which accounted for 10%
in 1980,Linking Words
then
experienced an increase to 15 in 2000,Linking Words
while
for the prediction the share will Linking Words
amounted
to approximately 22% in 2030.In terms of Germany,began at 15%,afterward increased slightly to 20% and will Wrong verb form
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peak
at 25% among all the given countries.
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regards to
the UK,the proportion comprised roughly 13% in 1980 and
underwent a negligible rise to 15% in 2000 and will foretell at nearly 18% in the future period.Replace the word
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