The graph illustrates the level of air pollutants in the United Kingdom, in unit of tonnes, along with changes over time

The graph illustrates the level of air pollutants in the United Kingdom, in unit of tonnes, along with changes over time
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph illustrates the level of air pollutants in the United Kingdom, in unit of tonnes, along with changes over time
The graph illustrates the level of
air
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pollutants in the United Kingdom, in
unit
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units
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of tonnes,
along with
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changes over time
Firstly
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, the total amount of
air
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pollution was 7 million
ton
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tons
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but steadily dipped until 1999 when it reached a marginal plateau and started to decline again up to the 3
ton
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tons
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.
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, industrial
pollutant
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pollutants
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constituted 5,5 million
ton
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tons
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and progressively decreased until
the
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apply
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1993,
then
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dropped abruptly before
the
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1996. After that, the
statistic
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statistics
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leveled off and
continue
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continued
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to
declining
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decline
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.
Thirdly
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, households, despite the
oscillate
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dynamic, started with the initial point of one million tons and almost fully eliminated
air
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pollutions
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pollution
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by 2005.
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, starting from the same initial point as the households, transport, which experienced insignificant fluctuations, became the only factor on the graph that barely
increase
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increased
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it's
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its
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influence on
air
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pollution "positively"

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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