The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
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The bar chart illustrates the expenditure of the
UK
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and
France
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for different categories of goods in 2010.The Vertical axis shows how much money was spent,
while
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the horizontal one means the goods for which it was spent
such
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as automobiles,books,cameras etc.
Overall
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,
according to
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the bar chart, both countries prefer to allocate more funding for auto,and less for the perfume industry.
Nonetheless
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,the
UK
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endeavouring to spend relatively equal funding for each category, despite perfume.
Whereas
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France
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followed a diminishing trend from cars to cameras.In total, the
UK
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spent significantly more money on
consumer'
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goods than
France
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did. Starting from the weakest category,which acquired approximately 160000 pounds from each country.The most expensive ones were cars, purchasing 450000 pounds,a little less cost was for computers, 350000 by the
UK
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and around 380000 by
France
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.
France
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spends less and less on the next categories.
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, it can be argued that
France
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allocates more money than the
UK
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in 2 categories out of 5,in the computer and perfume areas.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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