The graph below shows how much waste is collected and recycled in the US

The graph below shows how much waste is collected and recycled in the US
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows how much waste is collected and recycled in the US
The graph demonstrates how much rubbish was collected and recovered between 1960 and 2005 in the United States. As can be seen, the total debris recycling rose to over 80 million in 2005,
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of repossession reached a peak %of 40 in the same year. We can see clearly the amount of rubbish reconstruction was increasing steadily,
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of recycling rose from %30 %to 40, between 1995 and 2005. The total trash improvement grew rapidly from almost 20 to over 60 million tons between 1990 and 1995. In
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of recycling decreased from %40 %to 30. The total trash improvement was at %10
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and the total scrap resumption at nearly 15 million tons,
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the recycling was %20 in 1960 and these numbers remained the same until 1970. In conclusion, the amount of garbage reconstruction increased every decade except between 1960 and 1970.
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, the recycling
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fluctuated after 1970.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • amount
  • notable
  • increase
  • decrease
  • analyze
  • emphasize
  • stagnated
  • compare
  • contrast
  • relationship
  • apparent
  • variables
  • overview
  • highlight
  • efforts
  • insights
  • implications
  • observed
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