The line graph shows the prison population in a European country between 1911 and 2001

The line graph shows the prison population in a European country between 1911 and 2001
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The line graph presents the data of male and female
population
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/ who were arrested in a European country, in a 10-year
period
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from 1911 to 2001. One striking feature is that, by the given time
period
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male
population
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in jail experienced an upward trend, the opposite was true for the female prison
population
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.
First,
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if we look at the data of mail jailors in the initial
period
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between 1911 to 1921 their quantity was almost 19,000. Despite,
that
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the
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male
population
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witnessed
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decrease
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a decrease
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by the year 1931, it rapidly changed direction and started to increase. It continued in the moderate time
period
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from 1941 to reaching around 10,000 to 20,000. The prison
population
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decreased slightly over the decade.
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, it started growing up till the ultimate
period
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,
by
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having nearly 45,000 male
population
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.
On the other hand
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,
according to
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the second line graph from 1991 to 1941, female
prisoners
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prisoners'
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plunge plummeted from 3,250 to 500, respectively. In 1941 it started to rise and reached 1,250 by the year 1961.
Then
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, dropped from nearly 1,250 to 1,000. After continued to increase until 2001.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • steady rise
  • sharp decline
  • plateau
  • spike
  • dip
  • trend
  • peak
  • period
  • decade
  • stable
  • significant change
  • historical context
  • socio-political factors
  • implications
  • legal system
  • economy
  • social services
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