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The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
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The map illustrates the development of
Medowside
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village
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 and a town named
Fonton
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, from the year 1962 until now.
Overall
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,
Medowside
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Village
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 has witnessed significant development.
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, the
village
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 merges with the town and the development of various facilities is observed through the time period of 1962-2025. In the year 1962, there was a railway track passing through
Fonton
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while
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Medowside
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 was connected via an unpaved road. By 1985,
Medowside
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 expanded the surface area occupied and developed two roads, one of which connected with
Fonton
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.
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, facilities like residential
estate
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, leisure
complex
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complexes
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 and
store
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stores
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 were available in the
village
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.
In
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 present, the
village
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 has expanded and turned into a suburb.
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, it merged with
Fonton
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 and housing and superstore grew bigger. Meanwhile, there is a new track passing through
Fonton
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 which connects to the station situated near the new hotel. A new business park is opened in the middle of the road connecting the suburb to
Fonton
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medowside, village, fonton with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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