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The bar chart show the number of visitors to three Londan Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart show the number of visitors to three Londan Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the range of individuals visiting three different museums that are the National
Gallery
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, the Victoria and Albert, and the British
Museum
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 of London annually over the period of 5 years( from 2007 to 2012).
Overall
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,
initially
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, in 2007, the Victoria and Albert
Museum
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 was more famous among visitors
while
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 after 5 years the position was taken by the National
Gallery
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.
Moreover
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, it was clear that more people used to observe the
gallery
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 and Britisher
Museum
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 after 2009
however
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,
opposite
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 trend was observed in the other collections. In the year 2007, more than 5
million
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 was accounted for annual visitors to the
gallery
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 and it kept surging by almost 0.1% each year in the next 24 months. After that, the yearly population visiting the art
gallery
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 reached
to11
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11
lakhs
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then
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 dramatically rose to 16
million
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 approximately. Over the period of 3 years, the
traveler's
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 exploration
to
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 the Victoria and British
Museum
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 gradually declined from more than 100
lakhs
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 to more than 500
lakhs
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 respectively. After 2010, annual visitors to Albert
Gallery
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 kept rising and reached 10
million
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 in 2012
whereas
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, the number of
travelers
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 to the Britisher collection dramatically increased from 53 to 11
lakhs
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 in the next
one
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year
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then
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 to 14
million
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 in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gallery, museum, million, lakhs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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