In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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What works well
2You have addressed the task and presented both sides of the argument, which shows critical thinking about the topic.
The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, which helps in organizing your ideas.
Improvement Suggestions
3The introduction could be clearer in stating your main argument. Try to include a concise thesis statement that summarizes your position on the issue.
Use linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. This helps the reader follow your argument more easily.
Provide more detailed examples to support your points, especially in the main body paragraphs. This will strengthen your argument and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the subject.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.