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The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares six countries namely China, India, Nepal,
Vietnam
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,
Brazil
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 and
Malaysia
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 in terms of the changes in the
number
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 of international
students
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 in
Australia
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 in two years, which are in 2019 and 2020.
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,
while
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 the highest proportion of
students
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 who went to study in
Australia
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 came from China, the lowest
number
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 of
students
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 came from
Vietnam
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,
Brazil
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 and
Malaysia
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 in both years. As the chart shows, in 2000, the greatest
number
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 of
students
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 in
Australia
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 was from
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China, at 182,325, but the smallest figures were in
Vietnam
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,
Brazil
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 and
Malaysia
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, at around 22,000.Indians and Nepalese
students
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 showed a bit
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 same numbers with 92,024 and 46,382 respectively. In 2020, there were some changes.The proportion of pupils in
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India
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, Nepal and
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 increased.
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, despite of growth, Chinese were still a lot who went to study in
Australia
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 with 162,568.
Students
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 who came from India and Nepal were 108,049 and 50,252 respectively.In 2020, the index of
students
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 represented the same lowest
number
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 in terms of
Vietnam
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 with 23,268,
Brazil
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21,086
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with 21,086
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 and
Malaysia
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 with 19,564
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students
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vietnam, brazil, malaysia, number, students, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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