Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improvw this situation. Discuss both view and give our opinion.

Things done by human beings
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adverse impacts on the
flaura
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flora
and fauna.
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of people said that it is hard to tackle
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alreday
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already
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activity,
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others
beleive
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believe
that some preventive measures can be adopted to improve
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problem. I will discuss both views and
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explain
my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. To start with, the point of saying that it is very late to solve
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problem is that, for their own profit. Nowadays, some individuals like builders, illegally cutting forests and disturbs the natural habitat of plants and animals, sell that wood at higher prices because some good quality wood is hard to find . If any group, team or
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are doing something good to save plants and animals, they always try to
demotive
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demotivate
demote
them. They always have links with authorities,
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them
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or something else to stop them
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for
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their
personal
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. They do not
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about others.
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the state of India
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which
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a lot of animals died and trees
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destroyed for building new flats and apartments and just selling at
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prices
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arguing point is that some rules and regulations can be taken to improve the situation.
For saving
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the life of already endangered
spcies
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species
, Government should apply some rules and regulations. If anyone
break
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these laws, heavy fines should be imposed on them or even imprisonment. Planting more and more trees and
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some special living environment to
amimals
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animals
that are almost finished. All
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dangerous activities like campfires or smoking in
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areas should be prohibited as these
mini fires
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give birth to heavy fires in the forests. A huge destruction can be seen as a
consequences
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of these fires. For
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, In national parks or conservative areas smoking should not be allowed in any circumstances. In conclusion, after discussing both
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points, I believe it is obliged to everybody to save flaurs and fauna for the betterment of their own planet. Natural wildlife can be saved and improved by adopting preventive measures.

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You effectively introduced both viewpoints and stated your personal opinion clearly.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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