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The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country.
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its
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It is
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 clear from the graph that there
is
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are
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 some
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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european
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European
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countries
countrys
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countries
the
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that
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to shows
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show
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change
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the change
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 in forms
while
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other country
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another country
other countries
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 between 2004 and 2008, japan
reamind
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remained
remind
 stable until 2008
show
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showing
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 a little increase
of
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in
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apploction
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application
 form. the
usa
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USA
 has been
conststaly
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constantly
 increasing
at
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apply
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the
applction
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application
 form
untill
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until
 reaches above 25000
in2008
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in 2008
.
russia
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Russia
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didnt
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didn't
 have
the
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apply
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much of
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an appliction
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appliction
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application
 form to the universities .
according to
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 what is shown , the
usa
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US
is
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had
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 the
higher
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highest
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 number of international applicants to
the
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apply
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universities between 2004
till
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and
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 2008.

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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