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The following maps show some of the changes that have taken placein Dubai in recent decades Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant

The following maps show some of the changes that have taken placein Dubai in recent decades Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant
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The figure illustrates a major change in
Dubai
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, in two different time periods. The first
picture
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 shows
Dubai
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 in the past and the next one clearly evidences
Dubai
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's changes in the present time.
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This
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 city has some big differences in comparison with its past.
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, the most significant change which can be understood from the photo, is that the population and in accordance
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 that, its housing has raised significantly.
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,
according to
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 the
picture
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, it is obvious that there are more buildings constructed in
Dubai
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 in the present time. Alternatively, the number of cars shows that the population has grown.
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, more trees and flowers are shown in the present-day
picture
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, which means there were more plans for environmental safety.
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, the
picture
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 illustrates a more crowded city, which may lead
Dubai
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 to some problems like air pollution. In brief,
Dubai
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 has changed and developed rapidly
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 its investment in building and sight-seen constructions.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dubai, picture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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