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The following maps show some of the changes that have taken placein Dubai in recent decades Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant

The following maps show some of the changes that have taken placein Dubai in recent decades Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant
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The provided maps illustrate the Clock
tower
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Tower
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 Roundabout in
city
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the city
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Dubai
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of Dubai
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 a few decades ago and in the present days.
Overall
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, it has gone through lots of critical changes, but some things
maintained
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have remained
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 the same.
Firstly
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, in the
past
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past,
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 the
amount
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number
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 of buildings was extremely low, two on the
noth
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north
 and two on the eastern side.
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, streets used to be empty and there
were
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was
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 a lot of
sphere shaped
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sphere-shaped
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 trees all around the road,
additionally
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, there was no surrounding around the clock tower in the middle.
Secondly
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, nowadays all the old
building
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buildings
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 except the one on the east are
reconstructed
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being reconstructed
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 and a lot of other skyscrapers are built around the monument and in Dubai. So,
number
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a number
the number
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 of people living there dramatically increased and the roads noe are jam-packed with vehicles. All the round trees were removed, and
instead
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 of
them
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them,
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 others were planted in the centre around the monument.
To conclude
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, the city has been through many changes through the years,
main
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the main
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 of which are new buildings.
However
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, the clock tower in the centre of the roundabout has not changed through the years.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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