Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map

depict

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depicts

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the improvment

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improvment

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improvement

Tarnagul

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in Tarnagul

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town

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period 100

years

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According to

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the map over the 50

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years

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years,

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the farmers

change

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changed

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Mandarins

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the Mandarins

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area

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Orranges

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Oranges

and Dairy to Lemons & Grapefruit, the population

increase

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increased

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as we can see

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Town

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the Town

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area

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become

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became

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big,

also

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they made a track crossing the

town

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from south to the north

with

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packing sheds north of the road. It is

clearly

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clear

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that

the

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in the

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years

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after 1950 a lot of changes starting with

Farmes

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Farmers

. Lemons & Grapefruit

turn

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turned

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into

wildlife

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a wildlife

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Sanctuary and they removed Orange trees to

became

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become

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unused

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an unused

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area

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and

adding

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added

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parking

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a parking

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area

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Moreover

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, we can see

Local

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the Local

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Museum come over

Packing

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to Packing

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Sheds and Craft Market

front

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in front

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of it, in the south we have Tourist

shop

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shops

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Then

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removing the tracks.

Town

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area

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areas

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become smaller after 40

years

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words town, years, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

131 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
infrastructure
land use
agricultural
residential
commercial
population growth
urban sprawl
modern amenities
environmental changes
town expansion
character
features
comparative analysis

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