There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter -describe the problems -explain how these problems are affecting the public -suggest some changes that could be made.

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+Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to bring your attention towards an issue that we

are

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have been

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facing

since

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for

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a long time. Now

this

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problem is creating disturbance for a lot of people. Transport

condition

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conditions

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are

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worsening day by day. I am

local

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a local

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resident of

city

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the city

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Sialkot

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of Sialkot

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, and we have only one bus stand in the whole city. I do agree with

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notion that it's a small city but there

are

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large

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a large

the large

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number of passengers who use public transport daily. Unfortunately, the buses are in

worst

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the worst

a worst

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condition. Their metal bodies are fully rusted and the seats are extremely uncomfortable. Technical issues are always in

queue

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the queue

a queue

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Majority

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The majority

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of people use public conveyance to reach their schools, universities and their job destinations. Private taxi fares are very high, it is impossible for citizens to hire private cars. These problems in public transport

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are

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affecting people's daily routine.

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, there is no roof on the waiting area of

bus

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the bus

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stand.

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, I do not use it most often,

but

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it is difficult for elders to wait

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standing. It's my humble request to introduce some new buses on these routes so that

poeple

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people

can easily cover their journey. Bus fares must

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be reduced so that the burden is lowered on passengers. As far as the roof of

waiting

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the waiting

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area is concerned, our local council can contribute some money for its construction. Waiting for prompt action from your side! Yours faithfully, AR

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task achievement

Try to give more specific examples of technical issues that the buses are experiencing, as well as elaborating on how the lack of a roof affects passengers directly.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph covers a single main idea and is well-developed to enhance coherence. Consider leading with a topic sentence in each paragraph to clarify your points.

coherence and cohesion

Be mindful of spelling errors, such as 'poeple' and 'transport condition.' Take time to proofread your letter before submitting.

task achievement

You have expressed the concerns clearly and structured the letter into distinct sections addressing the transport issues, impacts on citizens, and suggestions for improvement.

task achievement

The tone of your letter is respectful and formal, which is appropriate for the context of a complaint letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

240 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

plaguing
delays
frustration
inconvenience
productivity
rely on
daily commute
overall
condition
deteriorated
overcrowded
seating arrangements
compromises
safety
comfort
impacts
hygienic
maintenance
unpleasant
alternative
modes of transportation
congestion
pollution
fuel consumption
proposed
infrastructure
upgrading
expanding
cater to
growing population
focus on
regular maintenance
breakdowns
hire
train
customer service
overcrowding
expectations
managing
minimizing
appropriate action
reliable
efficient
sustainable
benefits
entire community
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests comma and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.