The given graph illustrates the numbers of
people
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taken
place at various activities of one social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
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taking
Overall
, the film Linking Words
club
had the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
participants
over the Use synonyms
20 year
period. Add a hyphen
20-year
Although
table tennis saw Linking Words
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a considreably
considreably
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considerably
considerable
marginal
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apply
number
of Use synonyms
attendee
in 2000, it nearly reached Fix the agreement mistake
attendees
to
similar Change preposition
apply
people
with film Use synonyms
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club
in 2020.
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clubs
To begin
with, the film Linking Words
club
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activity
showed the highest Use synonyms
number
of members from 2000 to 2020 in Melbourne. In 2000, about 65 Use synonyms
people
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took
place Verb problem
joined
in
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apply
flim
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film
club
and Use synonyms
then
virtually reached Linking Words
to
70 Change preposition
apply
people
it stabilised up until the year 2020. Use synonyms
At
the same period, martial arts Change preposition
During
participants
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leveled
off between 30 and 40 Change the spelling
levelled
people
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as well as
the second social Linking Words
activity
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was mostly
mostly chosen
in 2000. When it comes to table tennis, it had the lowest Add the auxiliary verb
is mostly chosen
number
of Use synonyms
entrant
with about 16 Fix the agreement mistake
entrants
people
in 2000, even though it was the second largest Use synonyms
number
with Use synonyms
approxiamately
55 Correct your spelling
approximately
participants
in 2020, Use synonyms
this
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activity
rocketed especially from 2010 to 2020.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
attendee
of the Fix the agreement mistake
attendees
ameteaur
dramatics had about 26 Correct your spelling
amateur
people
in 2000. It is noticeable that it slightly increased to 30 Use synonyms
people
in the first five years but Use synonyms
this
figure gradually declined to nearly 5 Linking Words
people
until 2020. Another interesting situation was members of musical performances, Use synonyms
due to
the beginning year. Entrants Linking Words
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firstly
took part in Change the word
first
this
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activity
in 2005 and it moderately ascended and reached Use synonyms
to
hardly 20 Change preposition
apply
participants
in 2020.Use synonyms
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