The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the two distinct types of
works
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work
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( manual and non-manual) done by men and women in Great Britain in the year 1992.
Overall
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, about 50% of males participated in machinery tasks
whereas
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, more than 70% of technology work was completed by females.
Moreover
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, in both genders the percentage of general workers was negligible and the ratio of other manual
jobs
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was almost
same
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the same
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throughout the year. In the year 1992, women
worked
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who worked
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as
a
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apply
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craftman accounted for only 3%
however
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the number was 8 times for men (24%).
Furthermore
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, the proportion of the labourer workforce was 2% in males and 1% in females
while
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for other manual
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jobs
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jobs,
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both genders represented almost equal ratio that was around a quarter. Over the period of 1992, the ratio of physical employment was higher in females a total of 69% out of which
professional
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sector holds 29%
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office workers accounted for 31% rest was the proportion of other hand
jobs
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.
According to
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the data, 36% of men did manager
jobs
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and 6% of males service in
office related
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office-related
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fields and other non-manual employements.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words jobs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment patterns
  • unemployment
  • sector
  • distribution
  • comparison
  • percentage
  • manufacturing
  • services
  • full-time
  • part-time
  • Great Britain
  • demographics
  • workforce
  • labor market
  • 1992
  • data representation
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