Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of this increased demand, and what measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

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Water is an integral necessity to living things, and the lack of it could be the end of some minorities who won't be able to reach it.

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since the demand for

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particular resource has expanded over the years, even the majority of communities worldwide have been affected. There are a lot of reasons that got us to

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point, One of the major causes is the poor use of it and not being resourceful with it. People need to be reminded that it's a limited resource and need to contribute to not waste it on things that are not essential like Aqua Parks, pools and even taking long showers. To put an end to

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disaster The government needs to establish a foundation on maintaining the origin of

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source and raise awareness in various places

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as schools, universities and malls where there is a bunch of audience available. As for the individuals, they could start by implementing filters and other tools that could limit the consumption of water and be self-observed about it.

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Enhance the clarity of your thesis statement in the introduction to better guide the reader on what to expect in your essay.

coherence

Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to improve the logical flow of ideas and to signal the focus of each section more clearly.

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Consider providing more specific examples or case studies to illustrate your points, which would strengthen your argument and make your ideas more compelling.

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You clearly identified the main problem and some causes, which shows an understanding of the topic.

coherence

Your conclusion provides a call to action, emphasizing the role of both governments and individuals, which is a good way to round off the essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

177 words

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Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of this increased demand, and what measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut music and art out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information and technology.

Some cultures appear to give preference to older people than younger people while other cultures seem to prefer the younger generation. Which do you think is better? Discuss including examples from your own knowledge and experience.