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The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a European university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a European university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph above illustrates how the quantities of foreign college students from different countries varied during the time between 2004 and 2008.
Overall
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, the number of applicants in Russia and the USA showed an upward trend,
while
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 the figure for China declined.
Besides
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, the quantities of applicants in Japan remained stable. The gap between China and America narrowed. The number of university students in China witnessed a gradual decrease from about 27000 in 2004 to around 15000 in 2008. With regard to Russia, its data remained stable at around 3000.
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, the quantities of enrolled folk from America go up to about 27000 of 14000.
Similarly
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, the figure for Japan started at probably 7000 to approximately 10000.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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