You have bought a washing machine. First you found that the machine did not work properly, and you had it changed. Then you found that the new one seriously entangled the clothes. Write to the manager of the company to complain about it. In your letter: - State your reason for writing, - Describe the problems, - Ask the provider to solve the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

tthis

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this

epistle with great regret to inform you about my recent purchase of

washing

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a washing

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machine from your company. With

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a heavy

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heart, I must say that I am very disappointed with

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scenario. Let me propound the reasons for my dismay. Actually, I bought a new washing machine from your company

last

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month.

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, I noticed that it did not work in

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mode. In other

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words

, a quick laundry was not possible. I complained about

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issue to your service centre. After that, the device was changed within two days. Unfortunately, the new one seriously entangled the clothes which is unacceptable.

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, my expensive outfits got damaged. I hope that

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letter will draw your attention to my claim and help to fix

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problem. I prefer to get a refund

instead

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of changing the washing machine for the second time.

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, I would appreciate it if you reply to

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letter by the end of

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week and organise a return as soon as possible. Looking forward

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a prompt reply from you regarding

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matter. Yours faithfully,

Vishally

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Vishal

Visually

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general

Make sure to double-check for typos to enhance the professionalism of your letter. For example, 'tthis' should be 'this', and 'wods' should be 'words'.

lexical resource

Consider using more varied vocabulary to express your disappointment and request for a refund. This can enhance the impact of your complaint.

coherence

Try to organize your concerns into clearer paragraphs, with each paragraph focusing on a single issue. This will improve coherence.

task achievement

You clearly stated the purpose of your letter and described the problems in detail.

task achievement

The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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