You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem either the high of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor. Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Mr John Wick I writing to express my dissatisfaction with the campus restaurant which is open until midnight and located under my accommodation. I have been at the University residence for 2 weeks. I have come here to improve my Japanese language skills.

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I have decided to choose

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apartment because the windows are located opposite

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the sea , after a hard day I come , sit and watch the gorgeous view .

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, my flat is on the 3rd floor it is very convenient to go outside and come back .

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, near our residence, there is a big cafe where I can have lunch

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let me explain the issue one by one, the noise

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coming from the new restaurant makes me annoyed. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is ,that they play jazz music, I even hear their noisy steps .

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,customers repeat after the singer

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and sing loud songs.

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, people dance and shout at each other . I am dissatisfied because I have a study

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day from 9:00 till 9:00 pm ,

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I come back to my accommodation to

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relax .

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, I cannot fall asleep because of loud noise . I would suggest changing the time of

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restaurant and closing it at 10:00 pm at least.

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, I would appreciate it if you take the necessary steps to solve the problem, mentioned above. Yours sincerely, Lucy Liam

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider adding a brief introduction to explain the context of your stay and your expectations.

Coherence and Cohesion

To enhance clarity, try to separate the explanation of the problem and the suggested solutions more distinctly.

Task Achievement

Make sure to proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors, such as adding 'am' in 'I am writing' and removing extra spaces in the sentence structure.

Task Achievement

Your letter maintains a formal tone, which is appropriate for addressing an authority figure like the governor.

Task Achievement

You have clearly expressed your dissatisfaction and the reasons behind it, which makes your complaint compelling.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

253 words

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You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem either the high of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor. Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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