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The chart shows the percentage of people who accessed news from 4 sources from 1995 and projection to 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of people who accessed news from 4 sources from 1995 and projection to 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 line chart illustrates the proportion of
people
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 who accessed news from four different sources including: TV, radio, newspaper, and internet from 1995 and anticipation to 2025. Units are measured in
percentage
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.
Overall
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, television was the most popular source over the period given, and it is anticipated to decline marginally. Radio and
newspaper
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newspapers
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 were
also
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 popular but slightly less than television in the first years, but they
projected
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are projected
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 to be less common in 2025. The internet was
unknown
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 source from 1995 to 2000, but in 2005 and later
people
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 relied on it as the most popular one, and it is anticipated to be the
favorite
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 one in 2025. With regard to the proportion of
people
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 who used TV as a source for accessing news, almost 70% of
people
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 began to use it in 1995, but
this
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percentage
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 fell to nearly 58% after 2000 and remained steady until 2020, and it is anticipated to decline to 50% in 2025. The Internet,
on the other hand
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, was unreliable until 2005. The
percentage
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 of
people
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 after that year soared from 0 to 30% in 2010. and it continued
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 over the period given. It is anticipated to reach a peak of 60% in 2025. The
percentage
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 of
people
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 who accessed news
throught
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through
thought
 radio was close to
that
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the
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percentage
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 of
people
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 who used
newspaper
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newspapers
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, and they both were around 55% in the first year.
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, these proportions dropped gradually over the period given to 30%, and they are projected to remain close but under in 2025.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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